Repeated use of “hence” and “thus”, creating unnatural prose. Certain pauses in speech are longer than one (1) second, making the viewer worry for the speaker instead of focusing on the pitch. Despite the above, the idea presents something not yet attempted in Singapore, which is a big plus.
Repeated use of “hence” and “thus”, creating unnatural prose. Certain pauses in speech are longer than one (1) second, making the viewer worry for the speaker instead of focusing on the pitch. Despite the above, the idea presents something not yet attempted in Singapore, which is a big plus.
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